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peg22 ([personal profile] peg22) wrote2009-05-20 11:33 am
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Apparently, I've been neglecting The Boys . . . S/H


So I'm off trying to write a Hawkeye/BJ drabble for[info]thayln  . . . and a Starsky/Huggy one for 
dipslikeramon . . . when of course the original boys (O'Brien and Rafferty to those in the know . . .) butt right in and force me to write a little snip ALL ABOUT THEM . . . 
I'm starting to think they just like me to write them in the closet . . .

 

 



“Because I love you, dumbass.”

 

Before the words could die their horrible deaths upon the ears of the entire squad room, Starsky was out the door. He stopped around the corner, breathing hard, the realization of what’d just happened sinking slowly into his brain with the precision of a surgeon’s scalpel.

 

“Oh, hell.”

 

He checked his pockets for the Torino keys and his billfold. He figured he could make it to Nevada by noon. Disappear into the desert, create a new life maybe in Reno, or Vegas. He used to run the grill at Dino’s Diner in Brooklyn and he was no slouch at folding towels. Surely some big hotel could use his services . . . he also knew he filled out his jeans in that way that made the ladies swoon and Hutch as hard as a rock . . .

 

“Aw, fuck.”

 

He couldn’t do that to Hutch. Finally proclaim his love to the dumbass and then dash. He could imagine Hutch’s reaction. He’d quit the force, grow a beard, live on the beach. Probably start living in his car. Practically did already. This morning he’d found a plant and half a pizza in the back . . .

 

“Starsky . . .”

 

He turned to see Hutch coming down the hall. For a brief moment he considered ducking into the closet. Thought about how that would look. Because he knew Hutch would follow him. And then they’d have to explain why they were in the closet, someone might catch them coming out of the closet . . . it was a damn mess.

 

“Starsky – stop.”

 

He knew he would catch hell for not listening to Hutch, but he slid around the corner and down the stairs. He was within two feet of the door and certain freedom when Hutch somehow caught up with him, grabbed him by the collar and steered him away from the door and towards the supply closet.

 

“Not the closet,” Starsky hissed and tried to twist out of Hutch’s grasp.

 

“Too late for that, Starsk,” Hutch grunted and shoved the door open with his shoulder, tossed Starsky in, and closed the door. They stood for a moment, while Hutch found the light string and pulled it and Starsky stood with his arms crossed, frowning.

 

Hutch moved toward Starsky. “So why did you cut out like that?”

 

Starsky backed up against the paper towels. “Uh . . . well . . .”

 

Hutch pressed closer. “Not so talkative now, are you?”

 

“Come on, Hutch . . .”

 

Hutch took one more step and their chests bumped and Starsky put his hands up and Hutch grabbed them and twisted them above Starsky’s head, pinning them against the bottles of bleach on the top shelf.

 

“Come on, what, Starsk?” He smiled and dipped his head, sniffing Starsky’s neck, pressing his body against Starsky’s, his knee coming up between Starsky’s  . . .

 

“Not fair.” Starsky mumbled and his head fell back, smacking against cans of room freshener.

 

“Oh, it’s fair.” Hutch nipped at Starsky’s neck and then lifted his head. “Been waiting forever to hear those words out of your mouth and then you split, leaving me there with the whole squad. That was not fair.”

 

“You’ve been waiting forever?” Starsky tried to concentrate, but Hutch had resumed his interrogation of Starsky’s skin. “Oh, man . . .”

 

He made a token attempt to break out of the hold Hutch had on his wrists, but when Hutch grabbed harder, they both leaned further, and then they were kissing and Starsky felt Hutch’s tongue in his mouth and Hutch’s hand on his crotch and he didn’t care that he was in a closet at work, or that toilet paper rolls had begun to rain down on their heads or that someone was now knocking on the door. . .

 

Suddenly Starsky felt air instead of Hutch and opened his eyes to see Hutch standing there, grinning, rearranging his very obvious bulge.

 

“Yeah, yeah, I’ll be out in a minute,” Hutch growled at the door and then turned back to Starsky and chuckled. “You’d better wait a minute – looks like you’re about to bust.” He nodded at Starsky’s crotch.

 

Starsky stood there, panting, wondering what had just happened. How had five little words turned into this?

He looked up and Hutch was at the door. 

“Oh, by the way, I love you too, asshole.” Hutch opened the door and disappeared.

 

fin . . . 

 



And after this regularly unscheduled break, I am back to Korea and The Pits . . . Swear!!!
  

[identity profile] dipslikeramon.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
ROFLMAOPMP! See! You write them like MEN! I fucking love this! "I love you, dummy!" "By the way, I lovey ou too, asshole!" That's so very THEM!!!

Hell, you keep cranking out stuff like this, K, you can put off my drabble till the judgment trump blows! *G*

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks girl - I also like them to act like MEN! Am still stewing on your drabble, though . . . love to have homework!
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[identity profile] lauramcewan.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, I needed this today.

There's my five words!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
oh you're good - now start a fic with that sentence (cuz you don't have ENOUGH to do ;) Glad to help with the day . . .

[identity profile] nancys-soul.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 04:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I`m with dipslikeramon, you write`m like real men in love or should I say like I see S&H in love! Continue on!:)

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks - I'll ditto that - I just love the thought that they're so macho and so drippy in love at the same time . . . good subjects to write on and on about!

[identity profile] ginalin.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay for terrific dialog and characterization...and it was good fun too.

Starsky freaked out mental babble was particularly entertaining.

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! Yeah, I love a Starsky rant . . .
and btw, I was kinda wanting a good ginalin fic . . . still re-read your list one . . . love Hutch in glasses . . .

[identity profile] ginalin.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I need to start writing again...it'll be good for me since I'm not working and going a bit stir crazy at the moment. *G*

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
yes, I concur - write out of stir craziness - it's what's kept me going these last few months!

[identity profile] igbc.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved this! Very cute, especially Starsky immediately trying to plan his escape to Nevada!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks - and yeah, please friend me!

[identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh you're brilliant! He’d quit the force, grow a beard, live on the beach. Probably start living in his car. How well do you know and write these two?? Only you can combine romance and machismo so damn perfectly.

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks girly - I do love a good Starsky rant/musing . . .

[identity profile] mara-snh.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
The closet! Wonderful :-)

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:17 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks, mara. I seem to have more than a few "closet fics"

[identity profile] mara-snh.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Anthology!

[identity profile] mlmcats.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Great little story! SO realistic too.

You really need to spend more time writing these guys - you have them down perfectly! (Or up as the case may be:)

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks - I do love writing the boys in love! I do think this case was definitely UP . . . snerk!
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[personal profile] hardboiledbaby 2009-05-20 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, you gotta go where the muse takes you, and yours took you to a mighty fine place ... the details in phrases like these:

This morning he’d found a plant and half a pizza in the back ...
... toilet paper rolls had begun to rain down on their heads ...


really make this perfect. Great job!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks for reading. I do like them in a closet - and I can imagine they could do some damage to cleaning supplies ;)

[identity profile] aesposito.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
guh! Screw the rest... write more boys!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
ha! Well, seems where it's headed for the moment!

(Anonymous) 2009-05-20 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I like it very much. It's funny and touching and easygoing. Everything necessary is there, but nothing too large (sorry für the language, english is not my first language). Greetings from Lika.

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:20 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you, Lika. Glad you liked the story.

[identity profile] mac-sh.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 08:43 pm (UTC)(link)
*makes a happy sigh*
this is wonderful! and the last sentence is a killer...=P
I'm just so impressed by this...! awesome!!! <3

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:21 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks, glad to hear happy sighs! Easy to do with these boys, I think!

[identity profile] igbc.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I should have added to my comment above -- may I friend you? I see you have far too much good fic on your site for me to miss!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
oh sure - read away!
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[identity profile] perverteerno1.livejournal.com 2009-05-24 10:36 am (UTC)(link)
*smiling like a loon*

that was really nice :)

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-26 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
oh thanks - it's those boys, they always make us smile!

[identity profile] enednoviel.livejournal.com 2009-05-25 06:30 am (UTC)(link)
Catching up with my reading...

LOVED this:

He couldn’t do that to Hutch. Finally proclaim his love to the dumbass and then dash. He could imagine Hutch’s reaction. He’d quit the force, grow a beard, live on the beach. Probably start living in his car. Practically did already. This morning he’d found a plant and half a pizza in the back . . .

And... "Not the closet!" LOL!!!

Thank you for brightening an otherwise miserable morning.

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2009-05-26 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks - glad to help you feel a little better . . .

[identity profile] diane-c.livejournal.com 2010-11-10 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Kaye, I really love your writing, so I was looking at fic on your LJ and found this, and OH WOW is it hot. And funny and adorable. This kind of scenario, to me, is way hotter than most explicit stuff. (Not I don't appreciate explicit stuff! :) I'm going to have fun picturing this one, again and again. Both steamy and charming, my favorite combo!