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peg22 ([personal profile] peg22) wrote2012-10-17 03:16 pm
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I committee'd a drabble (snerk)










Was inspired today by the post of the lovely pics of The Committee episode by [livejournal.com profile] nancys_soul.


Title: Good Cop
Drabble
Author: Kaye
PG
S/H
Mention of The Committee and Snowstorm.



He watched Hutch crash into the booth full of cops. Knew it hurt. Knew it was the only way. To catch a bad cop he had to be a bad cop. He hated bad cops. Killed his father, fucked up his brother, broke his mother’s heart. Watched it break Hutch the last time. Clean shoot. Oxymoron. Hutch sent Burke to hell and followed him down. But that was before. Before the night they figured out what really mattered. When their hearts had folded into each other, me and thee etched into their bones.

He hoped they’d survive the make-up sex.



[identity profile] nancys-soul.livejournal.com 2012-10-17 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! That was really good. I hope they survive make up sex too, but if not they would die happy! Well done.

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks - and thanks for all those lovely pics you post!

[identity profile] dipslikeramon.livejournal.com 2012-10-17 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, man!! That was *gorgeous*, Ma!

What a stunner!!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks girly - first time with the boys in a while. was fun!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2012-10-17 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't know if I've ever seen anything of yours, but what a introduction! Wow. I love that last sentence shocker! :)

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks for reading - and I got lots o stuff - check out me journal :)

[identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
That was great. I hope they survive the make-up sex too! *bg*

It's good seeing you post!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks kat! yeah, it's been a long while - fun though, should do more of this!

[identity profile] provencepuss.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
short sharp and brilliant!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks - and thanks for letting me know about formatting etc.

[identity profile] ultrapsychobrat.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 06:16 am (UTC)(link)
This is wonderful! What a sock to the emotions with only a few well chosen words. Congratulations!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks, glad you enjoyed!

[identity profile] ashkevran.livejournal.com 2012-10-18 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
You got to the heart of the matter as beautifully as I've ever seen in these few and perfect words. That last line is ... delicious, witty, sharp. Thank you!

[identity profile] peg22.livejournal.com 2012-10-19 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks so much - I think drabbles are a piece of art really - trying to get every word to matter. glad you liked it!