He looked older and thinner. And heavier. And the last bit of House’s heart shattered against his chest. Aftershock. To be expected.
Too often in fic, the poetics don't mean anything and are kind of a sad attempt on the writer's part to make what they're saying, you know, "deeper". NOT THIS ONE. This was the most successfully poetic "House" fic I've ever read. Very beautiful, and a nice post-ep. I will come back to it.
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Date: 2008-05-23 06:29 pm (UTC)He looked older and thinner. And heavier. And the last bit of House’s heart shattered against his chest. Aftershock. To be expected.
Too often in fic, the poetics don't mean anything and are kind of a sad attempt on the writer's part to make what they're saying, you know, "deeper". NOT THIS ONE. This was the most successfully poetic "House" fic I've ever read. Very beautiful, and a nice post-ep. I will come back to it.
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