Lovely little piece! :-) I love seeing their relationship through the eyes of others.
Special favourites:
This little insight: "The one thing Huggy had already figured out about Starsky was that it wasn't so until Starsky said it was so. But it was so...so." ... had me giggle; it's so true!
Oh, and "it hit her like a ton of undercooked matzo" is such a beautifully eloquent simile!
And "and he opened his mouth to complain and I opened my mouth to tell him to stop complaining and then everything stopped." is clever and sweet.
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Date: 2007-08-28 06:36 am (UTC)Lovely little piece! :-) I love seeing their relationship through the eyes of others.
Special favourites:
This little insight: "The one thing Huggy had already figured out about Starsky was that it wasn't so until Starsky said it was so. But it was so...so." ... had me giggle; it's so true!
Oh, and "it hit her like a ton of undercooked matzo" is such a beautifully eloquent simile!
And "and he opened his mouth to complain and I opened my mouth to tell him to stop complaining and then everything stopped." is clever and sweet.
And I love the final sentence. Very cute.